Strong & Weak Samples
of Student Writing


Essay Quizzes
Path 2 Short Essays
Term Paper Outlines
Term Papers
Poetry Analysis
GWR ESSAYS
strong essay quizzes (Engl 334)
strong essay
Wilkie Collins's
Poor Miss Finch
outline
Joseph Conrad's Heart of Darkness
essay with plagiarism
To the Lighthouse / 1st pg
 
strong essay
Charles Dickens's
Barnaby Rudge
outline
Virginia Woolf's To the Lighthouse
strong film analysis of Pumpkin
middling samples
 
strong essay
Charlotte Mary Yonge's
The Clever Woman of the Family
strong film analysis of Moulin Rouge!
weak samples
 
weaker sample:
organization problems
 
 
weaker sample:
difficulties narrowing focus
strong sample
Works Cited page
(Engl 304)
 
 
 
weaker sample:
ineffective diction
strong sample
Works Cited page
(Dr. M's dissertation)
 

 

Dr. Paul Marchbanks
pmarchba@calpoly.edu